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Malleable and Sweet

Malleable and sweet as sea breeze ; This that rest on my left shoulders, Spilled in me and I mixed with her, Flowing between my fingers and Becomes soft on the saddle of the night. Opens and closes my spiritual buckets, Holds my blackness voice, Practice to understand the "No".. And the fear of "Yes. Stay up over my mat tiredness While the sleep goes,without me. The one she loved me and I know nothing, But to love what she loves, And she knows nothing but to love me. That heads to anything or Nothing, Hits me by her flowing and I hit nothing.. Simmering on my door and thresholds, The anxiety of locks. .... Tell her .. I have nothing but fun and fatigue Oh idea which you lean on my chest!

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Date: 3/13/2014 8:13:00 PM
Wow, deep Fatima. Great imagery, and good sense of metaphorical approaches in this amazing piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 3/15/2014 6:44:00 PM
Thanks Jiril for stopping by & for a nice comment.I'll read yours that for sure :)
Date: 3/12/2014 11:32:00 PM
Fatima, a nice sweet solid imagery. How are you my dear friend. I hope we can get back to reading one another. I miss, the goodness from all the sweet hearted poets. A great ending, Linda
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Fatima Nusairat
Date: 3/15/2014 6:40:00 PM
Linda dear I missed you so much what a surprise you still here :) sure dear I am happy to see you again and for sure i'll read yours whenever i have time. love fatima

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