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Malice In Blunderland

no more splitting hares
white rabbit's clock is ticking ...
stop passing the buck

03/03/20

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Michelle Faulkner

March 7, 2020 at 10:10 AM

That title is priceless - your message both witty and apt - a must have for my faves!

Jan Allison

March 7, 2020 at 11:23 AM

The title came first lol, I think they are as important as the poem itself:-) hugs jan xx

Peter Dome

March 4, 2020 at 2:40 PM

Clever little write. Well done. dye

Jan Allison

March 4, 2020 at 2:42 PM

thanks Peter:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 3, 2020 at 12:55 PM

- multiple personality disorder ... splitting hares ... (?) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 3, 2020 at 12:57 PM

lol, :-) I hadn't thought of that aspect of the phrase I was thinking of rabbits/ hares and bucks lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

March 3, 2020 at 8:59 AM

Ah yes, the title the wink, the nod, the come hither, the poetic "psssst". Wonderful Senryu Jan.

Jan Allison

March 3, 2020 at 9:51 AM

Thanks John I just love the silly title I came up with and the rest of the poem had many edits lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

March 3, 2020 at 6:54 AM

Haha take responsibility for your actions, no more looking through a wine glass. Tom

Jan Allison

March 3, 2020 at 8:06 AM

lol Tom thanks for dropping by:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

March 2, 2020 at 10:54 PM

Where on earth do you get these titles from,Jan? they are brilliant, as the poetry also to match are!

Jan Allison

March 3, 2020 at 3:02 AM

I get these silly ideas come into my head lol - I can wake up with a whole limerick and I have to note it down on a notepad by my bed lol. I think the titles are as important as the body of a poem. So lovely to see you Harry hope you and the family are safe and well:-) hugs Jan xx