Malice In Blunderland

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no more splitting hares
white rabbit's clock is ticking ...
stop passing the buck

03/03/20

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/7/2020 10:10:00 AM

That title is priceless - your message both witty and apt - a must have for my faves!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2020 11:23:00 AM

The title came first lol, I think they are as important as the poem itself:-) hugs jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 3/4/2020 2:40:00 PM

Clever little write. Well done. dye

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2020 2:42:00 PM

thanks Peter:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2020 12:55:00 PM

- multiple personality disorder ... splitting hares ... (?) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2020 12:57:00 PM

lol, :-) I hadn't thought of that aspect of the phrase I was thinking of rabbits/ hares and bucks lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 3/3/2020 8:59:00 AM

Ah yes, the title the wink, the nod, the come hither, the poetic "psssst". Wonderful Senryu Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thanks John I just love the silly title I came up with and the rest of the poem had many edits lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2020 6:54:00 AM

Haha take responsibility for your actions, no more looking through a wine glass. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2020 8:06:00 AM

lol Tom thanks for dropping by:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/2/2020 10:54:00 PM

Where on earth do you get these titles from,Jan? they are brilliant, as the poetry also to match are!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2020 3:02:00 AM

I get these silly ideas come into my head lol - I can wake up with a whole limerick and I have to note it down on a notepad by my bed lol. I think the titles are as important as the body of a poem. So lovely to see you Harry hope you and the family are safe and well:-) hugs Jan xx