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Malaise

eroded brawn his shoulders rounded curved by the weight of time exposing years of ache a wound so deep a man too broken devoid of pride submerged in shame bitten by remorse the victim of malaise his inside forever weeping Submitted on January 12, 2021 for contest PODIUM PLACING PROMISE (7) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on February 27, 2019

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Date: 3/3/2019 1:22:00 PM
Can see it, can feel it,... have lived it to a lesser extent. Resonates totally with me. Bravo, Line. ~ Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/3/2019 2:03:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 2/28/2019 7:24:00 PM
Sad, painful for him; beautifully handled.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2019 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, ML.

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