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Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  Liam McDaid and I co-authored this unrhymed tercet poem entitled:  "Making You Happy My Precious Love."  This poem touches on the theme of two young lovers finding each other and their quest to be together and to seek happiness as their mutual relationship continues to blossom and mature.  The lovers eventually "meld" as ONE in their love relationship, essentially seizing their very destiny and going on to fulfill it.  (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid - January 11, 2015) (Unrhymed Tercet)

Categories:  allegory, emotions, feelings, imagery, joy, love, and together.

Making You Happy My Precious Love

Upon the winds whispering so gently a love story unfolds
Under soft beautiful clouds with rainfalls splashing love
With two lovers holding, caressing, and kissing one another

The radiant azure sky fresh with recent rain and a rainbow
Gives way toward evening to a cold moon face wishing to 
Take the two lovers to a faraway special place full of sunshine

This magical place is where the sun shines forever beautiful
And the feelings, desires, passions, and emotions of love are 
Always together true as ONE of a much bigger love portrait

This young man and woman walk hand-in-hand very much in 
Love while listening to the far distant echoes thundering from 
Surrounding cliffs while near the ocean dream seagulls cry aloud

As the man opens the gates of this paradise with his special lady
They both experience at once blinding tears of warm joy, and he 
Just wants to fulfill immediately her every wish to be happy in love

The young man tells his sweetheart with a most earnest passion: 
 “Dearest One, I want so much to make you happy my precious love!”
Our love My Sweet unites our bodies and souls so complete and whole

These two lovers have found their paradise fulfilling their dream of being
Together always walking under a wonderful star-filled sky dazzling pure
Sharing their love and seizing their very destiny now—Two now as ONE  

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © 
All Rights Reserved (January 11, 2015) (Unrhymed Tercet)

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M. L. Kiser January 13, 2015 at 10:33 PM Gary, you have a knack for romance that is uncanny and I am so glad that you share it. Gary Bateman January 14, 2015 at 5:57 PM Thanks ML. I'm a real Softie when it comes to romantic writes!! Glad you liked this one. Writing with Liam is always an experience and much fun!! Best Always, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 12, 2015 at 12:42 PM Gary and Liam I thank both of you for this wonderful gift. Gary+ Liam= love divine, this is the equation. Both are wonderful people and wonderful poets. God bless both of you.Love from this friend>>>rajat Gary Bateman January 12, 2015 at 2:39 PM Rajat, Thanks so much my friend!! Love is indeed so important. I know that Liam always looks forward to corresponding with you too. Glad you liked this co-write!! I will be in touch later too!! God Bless and best wishes to you and your family -- Gary!!

Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 7:38 AM gary dear pal your words just blew me away dear friend love how this jelled together smiling Gary Bateman January 12, 2015 at 2:42 PM Glad you liked it Liam Mate!! The Leprechauns helped me to complete this one. Talk to you soon. Best!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter January 12, 2015 at 6:30 AM Hi Gary and Liam! Just dazzling! Another very beautiful romantic love poem written by you my dearest friends Gary and Liam! .smiling.A 7 +++ for each of you! A very sweet and tender poem to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. So moved by it! Much enjoyed. I love it! Your pens are mighty golden!! Wish you the best to both of you in 2015!And I pray that all your hopes and dreams come true for both of you this year!. smiling. Have a very wonderful day! God bless you both! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^0^ Dorian Petersen Potter January 13, 2015 at 6:07 PM Hi my dearest friend Gary! Of course I am hoping the same that 2015 will be a great year, the best ever, for all the three of us and that we all keep writing and doing all the great things we're capable of. smiling. God knows am hoping and planning to do exactly that, what you're hoping and wishing for. Looking forward to seeing more of your writings of course and Liam's too. smiling. Yes, the same here yesterday it sure was a very long day. I wish you a very wonderful new day ! Keep in touch! Best wishes to you too for 2015! :) Love and hugs! xxxoxo D.^0^ Gary Bateman January 12, 2015 at 2:47 PM Hello Dearest "D" -- Thanks as always for your marvelous comments and the super rating for the both of us. I hope 2015 is a great year for all three of us and we all keep writing and doing the great things we're all capable of. (I will write more later . . . as it has been a very long day on my end!!) Again, my best wishes for 2015!! Gary XOXOXO!!

Emile Pinet January 11, 2015 at 1:14 PM This reads as a love poem with sensual overtones that are reinforced with superb use of imagery. This is a sensuous poem swirling with the heady notions of man’s intoxication with love. Emile. Gary Bateman January 11, 2015 at 2:52 PM Emile, Thanks so much for your read and for your apt analysis. I really do appreciate your comments. Liam may comment back to you separately. Please feel free to check out my other poetry and I will take a further look at yours!! Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2015 at 11:45 AM - A beautiful, warm and romantic poem Gary and Liam - I really enjoy reading it !!!! (F + 7!) - A couple who are created to be together - They should be together until death white wings brand their days - huggs X 2 // Anne-Lise :) Gary Bateman January 11, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thanks My Dear Anne-Lise!! Appreciate the FAV and 7!! I certain agree with your comments. As you know, when you do these team writes, you're never totally sure which direction the theme is going to take you. (Liam may comment back to you later!!) Have a nice upcoming week -- and stay warm up there in Norway!! Best Always, Gary