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Making the Move

A sudden rush of blood
A sharp constriction of muscles 
A quick twitch in my abdomen
A million droplets on my forehead
All indicating am not in the mood
But my mind chooses to push on

A shy escapes my lungs 
My mind goes blank 
Words escape my lips
My muscles go limp
My legs almost giving away
Yet I was moving and was getting closer

A smooth cough escapes my dry mouth
She looks up and my eyes shyly wonder away
My mouth mumbles something softly
Her gentle reply brings me back to reality
I had moved this far;so I realized
And i knew there was no way back

I have finally made the move 
Here i was fidgeting for the words 
looking for the romantic phrases i had prepared
Hard I labored but none came out
Stammering a few unromantic words 
She stops and listens 
Finally I have made a life long friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/19/2013 8:14:00 AM
U have broken my ribs brother. Thats how honest we are with ourselves in writing. So strong outside but when it comes to love it is like that. Enjoyed the description of the moments . . . . . . . .
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