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Making My Heart Knock

In your eyes I see the way you look back at me it's what sets me free The way you smile it's one that lasts for awhile I love your style It's the way you talk and watching the way you walk that makes my heart knock Maybe it's your jeans or your handles that are lean either way I scream Could be that t-shirt it could be the way you flirt or thoughts of desert The one I count on in this life and life beyond my wife is my bond Edward J Ebbs - 10/21/2011

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Date: 11/7/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Ed. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 5:47:00 PM
Congrats Ed on a superb win for this excellent entry luv.. truly a grand read..
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:42:00 PM
WEll, this is so sweet and the note you wrote with it too, Ed!!
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Date: 10/22/2011 7:42:00 PM
You have such amazing talent. Your work is truly magnificent. Keep writing :)
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Date: 10/22/2011 5:58:00 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. take care
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Date: 10/22/2011 10:44:00 AM
ebbs ,~Good morning! How are you this early Saturday :-) morning. Stopping by to read a couple of poems and Haiku's .ENJOYING LIFE THIS MORNING, SMILES.. Take care and have yourself a GOOD DAY~ ;-) Always,..p.d
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 10/22/2011 11:33:00 AM
Back at You ~ Smiles for you...may you always have the sun in your face and the wind at your back ~ Peace :-)