Edward Ebbs Poet Senryu

Making My Heart Knock

In your eyes I see
the way you look back at me
it's what sets me free

The way you smile
it's one that lasts for awhile
I love your style

It's the way you talk
and watching the way you walk
that makes my heart knock

Maybe it's your jeans
or your handles that are lean
either way I scream

Could be that t-shirt
it could be the way you flirt
or thoughts of desert

The one I count on
in this life and life beyond
my wife is my bond

Edward J Ebbs - 10/21/2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 11:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Ed. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2011 at 5:47 PM Congrats Ed on a superb win for this excellent entry luv.. truly a grand read..

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2011 at 11:42 PM WEll, this is so sweet and the note you wrote with it too, Ed!!

Summer Uchacz October 22, 2011 at 7:42 PM You have such amazing talent. Your work is truly magnificent. Keep writing :)

Dana Smith October 22, 2011 at 5:58 PM You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. take care

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2011 at 10:44 AM ebbs ,~Good morning! How are you this early Saturday :-) morning. Stopping by to read a couple of poems and Haiku's .ENJOYING LIFE THIS MORNING, SMILES.. Take care and have yourself a GOOD DAY~ ;-) Always,..p.d Edward Ebbs October 22, 2011 at 11:33 AM Back at You ~ Smiles for you...may you always have the sun in your face and the wind at your back ~ Peace :-)