Making Love In the Day

My girl took me in her arms on this very day,
Made love to me in the most romantic way,
Nothing can beat sex when you are in  real love,
Instead of strangers in stalls with a rubber glove.

The sweat poured down my back from all the desire,
The room was covered with smoke from the heat of fire,
Making love with a soul mate that is good and true,
One who is clean and one who loves you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 29, 2011 at 1:56 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Mourning. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol
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