Making Love

blue breast heaves with passion’s breath crimson cheeks like mountain peaks eyes open and close with S..O..S as lips light the flesh on fire death so intimate a catalyst of desire hair like a siren’s in sensual muse the final blow like a trumpet’s thrust satisfaction in shrouds of sodden sheets his heartbeat like a nightclub drum invades her vulnerability 1/27/2018
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Raynes Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:04 PM
he casts his line out, wonderful writing Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Lewis!
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Wow that's a passionately written description. Remarkable, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Thanks so much, Line!
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