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Making Love

blue breast heaves with passion’s breath crimson cheeks like mountain peaks eyes open and close with S..O..S as lips light the flesh on fire death so intimate a catalyst of desire hair like a siren’s in sensual muse the final blow like a trumpet’s thrust satisfaction in shrouds of sodden sheets his heartbeat like a nightclub drum invades her vulnerability 1/27/2018

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Date: 1/28/2018 9:04:00 PM
he casts his line out, wonderful writing Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2018 9:09:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis!
Date: 1/27/2018 9:12:00 AM
Wow that's a passionately written description. Remarkable, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line!

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