Phyllis Babcock Poet Light Verse

Making Life Complete

I whispered my dreams
into the heavenly realm
Embracing the circle of life
You became my shining star
***the reason I live for
You make me strong
when I am weak
Making my life complete.


29/07/15

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Darlene Gifford August 7, 2015 at 8:23 PM When I read this, I think of God. He makes my life complete. And when I am weak, He is strong. He is all that you wrote about here. But I've been known to be wrong! Thanks for reading some of my poems, Phy, This poem is a 7. Hugs, Darlene

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 5:09 PM wow,now here is one I missed. Very lovely, Phyllis. Who was it you were thinking of?

Daver Austin August 6, 2015 at 3:33 PM Great mystery here Phyllis. Your heavenly friend must be heavenly situated, eh? Love, daver Phyllis Babcock August 8, 2015 at 12:15 PM Always heavenly situated. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 29, 2015 at 2:27 PM - Satisfied with life, a wonderful feeling - A lovely poem, dear Phyllis! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock August 8, 2015 at 12:15 PM thanks for your comment on my poem Anne Lise