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Making It a Whole Lot Better

What can one do for this world? I mean me! I've nothing to give among this great big world so full so much needs to be met as I live Get one's mind into action to work think deep to what you can do making it a whole lot better maybe then it'll prove you true Think of the good things one can do so many people that need great aid look outside your circle and see so many poor souls feel so afraid Raise up the love that lies within show it to those across the street give a helping hand to someone move yourself using your two feet Don't just criticise all that's bad show love and sympathy doing good even a smile could make one's day then someone will have understood (I have written this on how one can make our world a better place!!!!)

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Date: 8/5/2020 10:00:00 AM
kind words and a smile can be just the boost someone needs and it costs nothing but your time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/5/2020 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Jan, glad you liked it and trust all is well at home on the isle. Take care and keep safe Blessings and hugs,Gordon
Date: 8/4/2020 1:33:00 PM
I've heard it said over and over that you can't help them all but you can make it better one person or one animal at a time. Just reach out to the ones that come your way. Then you have done what you can. I feed hungry animals and help those I can. If I find a person in need I help them. I do what I can. One at a time. Great write Gordon. Remind us to think. God Bless, JB
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/4/2020 1:56:00 PM
Hi Judy, Glad you loved it and agree with your sentiments. Hope you're doing ok, take care and God bless. Keep safe, Gordon
Date: 8/4/2020 10:15:00 AM
Our world certainly needs help now, Gordon. Indeed, something as simple as a smile can lift another's spirits. Also, you make a difference to readers when you write about the current needs. Very well penned. The poem makes me want to do more to help others. Hugs, Carolyn
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/4/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, glad you liked it and made you think of helping others. Trust all is well and keeping safe, Blessings and hugs, Gordon

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