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Making An Entrance

Aware of welcome She swirls in gaily and twirls Showing off her dress note(and her name is Spring) for Linda Marie's contest Placed 4th in contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Joyce. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:04:00 PM

Nicely done image for Spring! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2010 8:32:00 AM

oh, I didn't see the note and was thinking it was fall and "hmmm, she is not THAT welcome to me", and then noticed it was spring, and yes yes yes, spring means summer is soon on the way!! Very welcome indeed.Congratulations, Joyce, and guess what? I am now able to view these winners FAST. I'm so glad I blogged about it and got good advice. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/18/2010 4:54:00 AM

the cuting line is a true marvel! Light & love

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/17/2010 3:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Joyce! She does make an impressive entrance! Love Joyce

Amy Green

Date: 6/16/2010 10:02:00 PM

Another incredible visual. congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 8:49:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful entry.. appreciate your support also.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Simone Segal

Date: 6/15/2010 7:24:00 AM

Excellent Senryu of Spring, love Simone

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/14/2010 10:29:00 AM

This is excellent. It certainly spells spring with such a fanfare. I like the imagery in this senryu. Great job! Joseph

Anthony Nutter

Date: 6/14/2010 3:17:00 AM

These few lines take me way back, to picking up the special young lady for a very special dance. TY for the memory. I know this was about spring, isn't spring when love blossoms also. Best wishes in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/14/2010 3:09:00 AM

A fine personification of Spring. Good luck in the contest, Joyce

De R

Date: 6/14/2010 2:11:00 AM

This is so sweet...spring like a girl showing off her dress...really loved your senryu.Good luck in the contest;) Emily

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/14/2010 1:22:00 AM

Nice personification in your spring senryu. Good luck in the contest :)