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Making An Entrance

Aware of welcome
She swirls in gaily and twirls 
Showing off her dress


note(and her name is Spring) for Linda Marie's contest

Placed 4th in contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2010 at 5:44 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Joyce. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

June 20, 2010 at 9:04 PM

Nicely done image for Spring! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

June 18, 2010 at 8:32 AM

oh, I didn't see the note and was thinking it was fall and "hmmm, she is not THAT welcome to me", and then noticed it was spring, and yes yes yes, spring means summer is soon on the way!! Very welcome indeed.Congratulations, Joyce, and guess what? I am now able to view these winners FAST. I'm so glad I blogged about it and got good advice. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

June 18, 2010 at 4:54 AM

the cuting line is a true marvel! Light & love

Audrey Haick

June 17, 2010 at 3:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Joyce! She does make an impressive entrance! Love Joyce

Amy Green

June 16, 2010 at 10:02 PM

Another incredible visual. congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2010 at 8:49 PM

Congrats Joyce on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful entry.. appreciate your support also.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Simone Segal

June 15, 2010 at 7:24 AM

Excellent Senryu of Spring, love Simone

Joseph Spence Sr

June 14, 2010 at 10:29 AM

This is excellent. It certainly spells spring with such a fanfare. I like the imagery in this senryu. Great job! Joseph

Anthony Nutter

June 14, 2010 at 3:17 AM

These few lines take me way back, to picking up the special young lady for a very special dance. TY for the memory. I know this was about spring, isn't spring when love blossoms also. Best wishes in the contest.