Making a point of it

Dead silence the cold shoulder.
He couldn't be bothered to feign interest.
Not even to be polite.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:47 PM
I am still confused about what a senryu is, but this one made me laugh, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Yes, Caren. Senryu and haiku have MANY rules and people don't agree on them.
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