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Making a Pass

is merely a mountain trail away ~ with a few hard slaps on the ass 

and if snags get in the way ~ dangle a carrot to break the impasse 


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David Kavanagh 

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Christopher Flaherty

October 22, 2023 at 3:16 PM

Very interesting indeed David Sir If you have broken you're whip / stick And run out of sugar cubes 2nd pass around the mountain trail When I lived in Holland in Alkmaar I found out this interesting fact or so I thought so Did you know the Carrot is in fact Purple in Color as it is a Bulb like a Tulip They turned it and made it Orange