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Making a Pass

is merely a mountain trail away ~ with a few hard slaps on the ass and if snags get in the way ~ dangle a carrot to break the impasse By David Kavanagh hms

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/22/2023 3:16:00 PM

Very interesting indeed David Sir If you have broken you're whip / stick And run out of sugar cubes 2nd pass around the mountain trail When I lived in Holland in Alkmaar I found out this interesting fact or so I thought so Did you know the Carrot is in fact Purple in Color as it is a Bulb like a Tulip They turned it and made it Orange

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 11:12:00 PM

Wonder why carrots are not expensive :) Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2023 12:23:00 PM

haha. sounds like you are a mule!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/18/2023 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I think?, indeed I am, in more ways than one lol! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/16/2023 2:27:00 PM

Ah, we can say ass? Dying tree gets in the way, smack the donkey towards the other way...I give..I suggest the bone trails and some thin nuts.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/17/2023 5:17:00 AM

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/16/2023 2:50:00 PM

Not bad Anaya, we’re on the same dubious wavelength, I’ll let the reader decide on which direction this one goes lol! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/16/2023 12:10:00 PM

This sends my brain into chaos - is it erudite or 1980s humour!?! I think I enjoyed it, unless it's about a blonde in fishnet stockings in which case I object lol :) very interesting juxtapositional statements that get you thinking

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/16/2023 12:18:00 PM

Ha! I was challenging myself to write a Monoku that I could talk myself out of, if approached by the morality police, I like your interpretation though, insightful as always lol, cheers David