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Making a Pass

is merely a mountain trail away ~ with a few hard slaps on the ass and if snags get in the way ~ dangle a carrot to break the impasse By David Kavanagh hms

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Date: 10/22/2023 3:16:00 PM
Very interesting indeed David Sir If you have broken you're whip / stick And run out of sugar cubes 2nd pass around the mountain trail When I lived in Holland in Alkmaar I found out this interesting fact or so I thought so Did you know the Carrot is in fact Purple in Color as it is a Bulb like a Tulip They turned it and made it Orange
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Date: 10/20/2023 11:12:00 PM
Wonder why carrots are not expensive :) Blessings
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Date: 10/18/2023 12:23:00 PM
haha. sounds like you are a mule!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/18/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I think?, indeed I am, in more ways than one lol! Cheers David
Date: 10/16/2023 2:27:00 PM
Ah, we can say ass? Dying tree gets in the way, smack the donkey towards the other way...I give..I suggest the bone trails and some thin nuts.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 10/17/2023 5:17:00 AM
Ha
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/16/2023 2:50:00 PM
Not bad Anaya, we’re on the same dubious wavelength, I’ll let the reader decide on which direction this one goes lol! Cheers David

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