Makes You Wonder What Went Wrong With Your Mind

Makes you wonder what went wrong with your mind
While u make the upma you forget adding onions
And that is where u wonder what happened to your mind
While you cook for the family u forget the salt 
And that is where you wonder what happened to your mind
While you step out of the house not sure you may trip
And that is where u wonder what happened to your mind
While you walk away to remove the winter blues
Your knee knocks up and makes you limp like drifter
And that is where you wonder what happened to your mind
But but but:
When my ammu calls up my mamanna
And that is where i know my mind is in place
My food being appreciated and i am high in spirit
And that is where i know my mind is in place
Going by my dreams travelling through my imagination
And that is where i know my mind is in place
My clothes are fitting well i don’t look a tramp
And that is where i know my mind is in place
The blooms are smiling giving a welcome morning
And that is where i know my mind is in place
Did i chase the pests and made my plants to smile 
And that is where i know my mind is in place 
The birds are waiting let me feed them soon 
I know my world is where i should know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 12:31 PM
this is a powerful poem. lINDA
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