Charles Sides Poet Senryu

Makes Me Smile-Makes Me Frown

MAKES ME SMILE

A bowl of Popcorn
Steaming hot and freshly popped 
 A delicious treat




MAKES ME FROWN

Morning newspaper
In a puddle, soggy-wet
 Will never be read

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Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2012 at 12:25 PM awesome, charles. that first one ALWAYS makes me smile!!! It's my all time favorite food.

Barbara Gorelick August 31, 2012 at 10:58 AM Clever..like both of them...BG

Kash Poet August 31, 2012 at 10:19 AM So true Charles.Enjoyed your senryu.Best wishes for the contest.