Makeover - Repost


You say I need a makeover,
that I'm not the man I could be
You say I'm too rough around the edges,
a little smoothing out would polish me
To you, I'm too straight ghetto;
I got the right mind,
just tilted a little wrong
Instead of saying: "I'm leaving,"
I say, "I be gone"
So let the makeover begin,
but I don't know what 
will be different when it end
Will my family recognize me,
will I need a new set of friends?
A bad vibe is arising,
trepidation is setting in
Now I'm willing to make this sacrifice
to satisfy your insecurity
But once the makeover is done,
will you still like what you see?
In due time, no doubt you'll learn
this one immutable reality:
You can take me out of the ghetto,
but you can't take the ghetto out of me
Although you may refine my speech,
to talk in a proper Elizabethan tone
I will always remain ghetto,
straight ghetto to the bone
I will tell it like it is,
I will only come strong
I will always remain ghetto,
straight ghetto to the bone 


A tribute to my beloved brother Joseph
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Desangre Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:43 PM
After having read "I Rode ShotGun", "As I Dire Breathe", and "On The Wrong Side", "Makeover" says a LOT. You have an unique style. One of a kind I would say. You're genuine leather, smooth, tough, durable, originally straight from nature. I get a blood & bone man. I say "You can't undo quality". This poem is one of my favorites. ~~~Niyna
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Star shine poetry my friend. I like the intimate feel of this piece.
Y. Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 3:23 PM
WoW! Hi Freddy, I loved and enjoyed everything about this piece. You accept a person as they are ,point blank! If someone is genuine in their "ghettoness" I would accept them 100%. This poem had a realness to it, and it's going straight into my favs. Have a wonderful day my friend friend:-) Alexis
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