Makeing Change Right

so many worked so hard
here to make knew  start
to be poor
can be a closes door
no matter where you are
here are far
lets all together work to gain
not have more race pain
have a insight
MAKEING CHANGE RIGHT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:20 AM
The poem is very nice, but as a rule qasida is longer than ghazal, but it follows the same system of rhyme. Check the definition and examples.
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