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Make You Sing

Given the chance I’ll make your body dance, Let my fingers do the walking and your body the talking. You think you’ve been on cloud 9? To me that’s the starting line. I’ll make you sweat then lick every drop, Play you like a fiddle never stopping at your middle. Start with your head till I reach your toe, At the end you will lose your soul. When it’s all finished you’ll be screaming for more, Take you up never let you down; Make you sing out loud without making a sound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 11:40:00 AM
Patrick, congratulations on your feature presentation this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:35:00 PM
OOOOWWWW! "This is it, Elizabeth!" Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/8/2010 2:38:00 PM
congrats!!
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Patrick. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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