Make You Laugh -Part 3

God, I can always talk to you
And I love it
Do you ever find yourself falling asleep when we talk to you?
Do you ever feel remorse?
How can you do everything at once?
Why do you like to be everyone’s source?
How do you always have your own way?
Can you do everything?
Why don’t you let everyone in on what you are doing? 
You are too funny God
I have to laugh
God do you know you are number one?
And no one is like You
No one can do things like you do
And everyone thinks You are the best
Do you dream God?
How can You want something and it will be done?
How do you know which ways to best communicate to people?
Do you ever stop trying?
God you never stop trying
And we thank you God
And you always make right
Everything
God why are you so good? 
And we love you so much
You are awesome God
Now back to my questions
Why do you insist that people put You first?
Have you ever not finished what you started?
Which way is your way?
I think I will stop for now
I will talk to you tomorrow
Love you 
Your daughter, Toquyen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/24/2012 11:18:00 AM
- part 3 ......next part 4 - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/23/2012 2:10:00 AM
Toquyen I like it..David
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/23/2012 5:44:00 AM
Thanks, David. I am not done with God yet! Love, Toquyen
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