Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Blank verse

Make the Naive Happy

Nice People
Are for the world’s
Days and Nights
Twinkling the hallucinations in both

Friends
Are for the good
And the bad
That makes up the hallucinations

Best Friends 
Are the potent vigour
That Hallucinates your
Every progressive motion

Family composes
The Easter bunnies
Santa’s deer’s
Amorous, jovial, and accurate

And these hallucinations
Dire?
Or are they constitutes
To plainly make you blissful

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Jay Loveless June 8, 2009 at 10:58 AM Nice Job. Good Use With Words. Lol Peace. Boo

Debbie Guzzi June 1, 2009 at 5:15 AM Last verse...Are these...or And are these...and I think "constructs" would be more what you mean? Exploring the relavence of the hallucination is a great topic for verse. Light, Love & Welcome

Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2009 at 7:00 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

Cesar Cantu May 25, 2009 at 2:12 PM Nice analogy, uncommon and interesting! Thanks a lot for sharing :)