Make Me Want It More

This is the rhythm, these are the words, make me want it more.
This is the sound, this is the beat, pound and pound the door.
Own the sounds that leave the ground, everything that's raw.
Own the world that pulls me in, I love you more and more.

Louder, louder, on the roof I'm singing to your core. 
I'm drinking in, the feelings ring you knock me for a four.
I need you now, I need you now, I'll even break the law.
Hold me now and don't let go and fill me with your awe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 5:47 AM
Colours of beautiful expression !
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Steve, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:15 AM
- Great, I enjoy reading this poem Steve :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tomlin Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thanks. Added 4 more lines.
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