Make It To Heaven

One day you wont know it happened 
your are just gone see the bright light flashing
the white light so bright 
Heaven in sight no more night
just coming to peace
forget the devil he is like rotting teeth
that fall out your mouth 
I am heading north not south
this feeling is something never felt
cannot be done with a human sense 
all those nights I knelt by my bedside 
kept my head held high
with the Messiah by my side
all the times I wanted to fall apart
I kept you close to my heart
the book of revelation 
can explain a lot about our nation 
your nation her nation his nation
the reason we are born and our family placement 
realize god already has an arrangement 
live a long life only if you can truly take it
when I die I hope to see the bright light
that's when I know I have made it
so for now I will try to make it
to Heaven.     -TA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/10/2018 7:26:00 PM
Keep moving...towards the light...one day you'll be in heaven...NICE write...Enjoyed it...
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Todd Aguilar Jr.
Date: 12/11/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed the write. Keep reading more to come! One Love. -TA
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