Make it Best
He Knew When She stopped Smiling
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"Dissonance" by: De Manière Negatiboa
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Surgery niceness, started the response, it
caused most of us to see things
in a different light. Maybe we shouldn't
have wrote this song! We collaborated to
write and of the 14 main characters
involved with this creational piece
thought it represented a classical
mastering. Most of the critique
caused others to frown. It tuned
our ears tom want to hear better
things the lady said. She avoided
eye contact and completely turned her body
away from me. Avoided me like I was the Plague
Moving away from me to reduce her anxiety
or discomfort, such as ignoring
messages or avoiding conversations.
It made her happy to say she liked the music
but the song was like stepping in the horses dung
wearing a wedding gown. "You don't want it
on you, you know!" Days later she thank us for
our decency by removing the lyrics and smiled
enough to give me a little solace to comfort
me. They didn't like it is all we could say!
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"rebuilding a sense of integrity"
Rebounding from a review of your talent
or chose of material "pathetic" and "horrendous"
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