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Snap goes each piece of crisp, dark, pungent chocolate, Dropping into a glass bowl of smooth, creamy milk chocolate chunks awaiting their magical transformation. The smooth liquid velvety double cream drizzles like a ribbon into the pan, As it heats, the surface begins to shimmer invitingly, Small bubbles appear as it boils and then cools just a little, anticipating the joy to come. Slowly, a ribbon of hot silky cream trickles over the waiting chocolate pieces The mixture is stirred inviting the chocolate to melt into the cream Making a marbled luscious silky, thickened pool. Strong, pungent, dark freshly brewed coffee drips into the dark tempting pool, Slowly and deliberately it is incorporated. After the mixture has tantalised with its deep, rich aroma for an hour I can’t wait any longer! The mixture has thickened into a thick, gooey, dark tempting mass. I scoop delicious spoonfuls of the shiny, slightly gooey mixture, rolling each into a ball. It starts to melt slightly leaving a thick gooey reminder on my fingers, I look forward to licking it off when I’m finished, extending the treat. I roll each small, dark, sticky treat into dark, dusty cocoa powder. Smelling the tantalising aroma of chocolate makes me almost drool in anticipation, Picking up a single truffle, it starts to melt slightly in the heat of my fingers, I take my first bite into the soft, silky, smooth, sweet treat savouring how it glides across my tongue. Boy it tastes good! Written on 30th September 2015

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Date: 9/30/2015 3:07:00 PM
Hi Nathan, you write well for a 10-year-old. I can't even get my 10-year-old to be this awesome.. (read your comment on the bottom) Anyways, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/30/2015 11:10:00 AM
Nathan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Nathan Bach
Date: 9/30/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, I'm 10 years old and I enjoy writing poetry. I think it's easier than writing stories and mush more fun. I'm mad about nature and I am looking forward to writing poems about nature. I cook with my mum and so I can write about that too. I'm looking forward to reading poems by lots of other people. I think I'll choose one of yours tonight, Nath:-)
Date: 9/30/2015 7:52:00 AM
oooh how delicious - what a wonderful descriptive write I am drooling now:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/30/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I'm really pleased you like my poem. Yours was the first comment I received. It was so great to find someone liked my poem, especially because I'm 10 years old. Mum said to just describe what I saw and smelled when I made truffles with her. I have to say they did taste awesome! Nath:-)

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