Make Believe Dreams

I am the moon and the stars to seduce mortals, 
With treacle touch of soft indulgent fickle light, 
Whilst heads yield cradled on feathers drifting in sleep. 
Knees kneel and holy books unfolded in prayer, 
Entrance by my vastness reminded how small they are. 
Glimmering guide, ships and a star to steer them by. 
Make believe dreams unwind; I am the moon and the stars.  


6/22/2020

It's Only Make Believe Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina Riddle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/29/2020 2:39:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:14:00 PM
gosh this almost goes with the theme of Nina's new contest. Congrats, Eve. GREAT little poem.
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Date: 6/28/2020 9:15:00 AM
This is a really enchanting muse Eve. Your pen is magical and soothing. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and lots of love :)
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:37:00 AM
This is simply beautiful. So beautiful. God bless you, dear friend and thank you for your entry. Love and prayers and congrats, Gina
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Date: 6/28/2020 2:02:00 AM
A shining make believe, Eve. Congratulations on this fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/28/2020 1:24:00 AM
Hello mam, Gracefully penned:-) Congratulations on your placement:-) Keep writing .Keep inspiring. Enjoy your day.Take care. ~Deepa
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Date: 6/27/2020 9:26:00 AM
Your poem is awesome Eve - I admire and respect you as a poetess and a friend. Well penned and good luck. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/24/2020 12:49:00 PM
This is beautiful... You are unique and bright as the moon and illuminate all our lives..
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Date: 6/23/2020 1:26:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Eve:)
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