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Make Believe

Let's imagine that you loved me
Would it be so hard to do?
And then, we'll pretend - while making believe - that I might, ...love you too

What would happen if you held me
Would it change the things you've planned?
Then, imagine love that lasts 'til the end...       
Just pretend..... if you can...

We'll just pretend..., (again),  we're more than friends, .. (and then) 
                              that love ... happens   within...

where dreams come true,  (do come true)    -      (ours could come true),...... 
Would you....   pretend?

Let's imagine it's tomorrow
Is it just too far to see?
Here we are, you and me,  with stars up above ,
                                           making  love ............ can't you see?

It could happen... if you let it
It would not be hard to do
But it's only a game, that we could make real..... if believed.  - Let's believe !

If you could see, ...(how close you are),.. beyond the stars,  (what's ours) ....
               is not    so far away
Believe in me... we'll wish on stars...        it's not      so hard

               Just imagine that you loved me
               Would it be too hard to do?




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12/10/15 Inspired by the contest hosted by Craig Cornish
To be read along with the lovely music of "Sweet Remembrance Of You"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHzw9TsMmsA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Great take with this lovely song Carrie.. Congrats on top place win!
A   Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Carrie, Congrats.... LINDA
Parker Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 2:24 PM
I can see why you won.There is desired sense and a feeling of hope that dreams can come true if only all the reasons were known...I thought is was a tough contest by Craig..your poem fit so well..congratulations my poetic friend..
Babbit Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Congrats, what a thought provoking poem with music to go with it. DMB
Gentry Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations on #1! I really like how you did this. Well done!
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:46 PM
congrats on your win. SKAT
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