John Read Poet Rhyme

Make Believe

I love living in my own little World
I'm happy there it's OK.
It's much more fun than the real One
For every days an Holiday.

My worlds,a world without Sorrows
In my world there is no Pain.
There's no rich,no poor,no kings or Queens
In my world, no one person will Reign.

It's a world of many Colours
A world where everyone is Free.
It's a world of peace and Love
A world of compassion and Tranquility.

I know my worlds not the real One
Its only my world of make Believe.
But it's a world I often Visit
If it's only in my Dreams.

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Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:58 AM This world can be a harsh place. I have a world of my own I escape to now and then, though can't stay there long. Great poem, John! Blessings, Kim M John Read July 7, 2023 at 11:24 AM Thank you Kim for your kind words God Bless.

Beryl Edmonds July 3, 2023 at 7:00 PM Sounds a lovely world to me even though it’s a dreamers fantasy. Lovely poetry brother John… Belle Beryl Edmonds July 4, 2023 at 1:44 PM Will do! John Read July 4, 2023 at 5:26 AM The world of today has become a nightmare sister Belle,so I'll keep on dreaming. Belle, Gordon has joined FFP, check out his poems when he starts posting on there when you have time.

Gordon Mcconnell July 3, 2023 at 3:22 PM Thanks John for your advice on GDP which I have tonight joined the forum and will add some poems later in the week so thanks again. Blessings,Gordon John Read July 4, 2023 at 5:22 AM Hi Gordon , I'see you had joined FFP, I left you a message on there. God bless.

Gordon Mcconnell July 3, 2023 at 12:15 PM Lovely penning John with good rhyme and flow, with nice imagery too. I would also be accused of living in my little own world, but it's one to love. I checked out the FFP you said about, I don't like the idea of only accepting original stuff that's not been on other websites but I'm still thinking about it. Take care, Gordon John Read July 3, 2023 at 12:29 PM Thank you Gordon for your time and comment. If you do decide to post on FFP, choose the forum first,you can post anything on there. Take care.