Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Quintain (English)

Make a Wish

Make it so that all hearts' discs are unformatted,
To rid them of hatred, greed and discrimination.
Pray they become clean and pure, as when created.
Teach them anew; love, generosity and compassion
To ensure a bright future for our next generation!



Form:English Quintain
11/07/16
Rhyme ababb
Contest: Make a wish
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Placed 7

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Eve Roper July 20, 2016 at 12:58 PM congratulations on this great quatrain, Sunita, :) Sunita U.D Palawon July 21, 2016 at 10:47 AM Thanks Eve, it has been my first trial of this form of poetry. I studied at univ. but never tried to compose lines in this way. I'm happy it has been appreciated. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight July 16, 2016 at 2:05 PM Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, Sunita! Loved reading it again. Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon July 17, 2016 at 12:08 AM Thanks Sandra for going through again. Its great encouragement. Your poems, I read are simply marvelous! :)

Alexis Y. July 15, 2016 at 11:31 PM Hi Sunita, Congratulations on your 7th place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Sunita U.D Palawon July 16, 2016 at 12:06 AM Thanks, you liked it. :) Sunita.

Jesse Day July 15, 2016 at 11:11 PM Congrats on your 7th place win in the Make a Wish contest - A very special wish to share! - Jesse Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 11:15 PM Thanks Jesse for through it. Congrats to you too. :)

Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 11:11 PM Thanks for going through it and glad you like my poem. It was an interesting theme to write upon. Thanks Kim for the contests. I love the contest on soup. Congrats to all the winners here! :D Sunita.

Kim Merryman July 15, 2016 at 9:26 PM Great write! Sunita, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 10:43 PM Thanks. It was an interesting theme from you. I'm glad it was appreciated. :)

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2016 at 9:16 PM a most wonderful wish, Sunita Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 10:42 PM Thanks dear hope it is granted! :D

Sandra Haight July 13, 2016 at 2:08 PM I really like your line, "Make it so that all hearts discs are unformatted," Sunita! If only we could. Such an amazing wish this is and how nicely you present it in this lovely Quintain. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon July 14, 2016 at 10:34 AM That's true...if only we could...But I feel human has gone on a one way track with no U-turn and towards its destruction it goes unfortunately. Thanks you enjoyed it Sandra :)

Sara Chansarkar July 12, 2016 at 11:52 AM This one is lovely, a wish for us to be humans! Sunita U.D Palawon July 13, 2016 at 11:37 AM Hmmm..ya, may be one day this wish will be fulfilled...:)

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2016 at 9:04 AM Very nice quintain on this topic! Sunita U.D Palawon July 12, 2016 at 10:02 AM thanks Andrea, it being a pleasure writing for the contests and reading all your nice lines. :)