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It's not too late to make your dreams come true. Can you recall sweet childhood and spontaneity? Something still is shining; let it beckon you. With hope, go out into the night, and like a child be! Make a wish upon the first radiant star you see. July 11, 2016 For the Make a Wish Poetry Contest if Kim Merryman

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Date: 9/13/2016 7:37:00 PM
magical write well done x ps thanks for stopping by
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Date: 8/10/2016 5:46:00 AM
Love this nice write
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:27:00 PM
I think we all need a little more kid in us Andrea...nice write!
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:29:00 AM
congrats on poem of the week, this is beautiful!
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Date: 7/21/2016 9:03:00 AM
aww...wonderful, grats on poem of the week ;)
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:30:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This piece is awesome. Congrats on getting the poem of the week. It is well deserved. Enjoy the honor: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:37:00 PM
After reading this I make a wish to write something this well about never stop believing! Nice Andrea! Congrats on this POTW! I'm off to find that star! :-)
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Date: 7/18/2016 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations. It definitely is OK to feel proud of this one. A simple message, you have uncomplicated leaving something beautiful and true. Put it in a bottle and send it to unknown shores and times for your message to last forever. David as always here in NZ.
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:43:00 PM
Andrea, A brilliant write. Nice start & outstanding end. Loved it. Congrats for POTW...//:) hugs
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Date: 7/18/2016 11:18:00 AM
Just another feather in a rather full headdress, Congratulations Andrea on POTW honors...
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:26:00 AM
Andrea, very cute poem here lady...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/17/2016 9:58:00 PM
Congrats! my friend on potw...very well done Andrea...^WW^
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Date: 7/17/2016 1:01:00 PM
wohoooo congrats on POTW Andrea:-):-):-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2016 10:52:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win in the 'make a wish' contest and also for Poem Of The Week! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/16/2016 9:58:00 AM
Hi Andrea, It's good to see that you made the winner's list. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on your 5th place win in the Make a Wish contest! - Jesse
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:53:00 PM
It gives me nostalgia of those carefree days of childhood...so true why can't we just sit and look at those stars and wish and wish...I like stars. Congrats. :)
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:10:00 PM
It's never too late to make your dreams come true! Andrea, congrats on your placement in my contest with your uplifting write, and thanks for participating!
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:51:00 PM
Lovely poem...Congratulations
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:13:00 PM
Inspiring and youthful spin for the contest. Good luck! Jesse
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem in the contest. Good luck. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
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Date: 7/14/2016 8:45:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea...hugs
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Date: 7/13/2016 3:56:00 PM
this is truly very clever poetry, reads for a child to understand, so did Disney and many many others, one day Andrea your wish will come true...
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Date: 7/13/2016 3:01:00 PM
I wish I was as good at poetry as you Andrea. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:19:00 AM
My last poem for the night, and a heart warming read. Thanks for my inner glow, and smile.
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