Daniel Turner Poet Quintain (English)

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Make a Wish

I wish hearts were never broken
Love would last forever
Minds were always open
All peoples, birds of a feather
Tolerance a worldly endeavor

I wish everyone had food to eat
Ignorance was no more
Pollution damage in retreat
There was no rich or poor
No such thing as war

 July 11 2016
  English Quintain rhyme scheme ababb
              Daniel Turner

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 10, 2016 at 7:06 PM Yes I wish there was no such thing as war.I also wish there where no war. I wish that everyone had food to eat.I wish that there was no suffering in the world.Congratulations Daniel Daniel Turner November 11, 2016 at 5:59 PM Thank you, Darlene. Yes the world is a cruel place. I too wish for peace:)

Charlie Smith July 16, 2016 at 8:33 AM Good thoughts, congratulations Daniel... Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 9:42 AM Thank you Charlie. You are very thoughtful and kind.

Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2016 at 11:05 PM Congrats on your placement. This is a wonderful wish! :) Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:45 AM Thank you Sunita.That's very thoughtful of you. I appreciate your kindness.

Jesse Day July 15, 2016 at 10:46 PM Congrats on your 3rd place win in the Make a Wish contest - Enjoyed your wishes! - Jesse Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:44 AM Thank you Jesse. I appreciate how thoughtful and kind you are. Peace my friend.

Alexis Y. July 15, 2016 at 10:01 PM Hi Daniel, Your wishes were heartfelt. I wish for the same things. Congrats on your winning write.It was well deserved:-).Alexis Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:43 AM Thank you Alexis. I suppose we'll just have to keep our fingers crossed as well. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

John Lawless July 15, 2016 at 9:47 PM Daniel I wish that even one of these would be realized in our time...congrats on your placement Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:42 AM Thank you John. What a wonderful place this would be! I appreciate your kindness.

Kim Merryman July 15, 2016 at 8:51 PM So many wonderful wishes! Congrats on your 3rd place win, Daniel! Thank you for supporting my contest. Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:41 AM Thank you Kim for letting me play along and for the consideration. I certainly am thankful for the placement.

Winged Warrior July 15, 2016 at 10:55 AM I wish your wish comes true Daniel...enjoyed...god bless...^WW^ Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:40 AM Thanks Wing Man. Me too! I appreciate the friendly visit.

Jean Murray July 13, 2016 at 3:22 PM I wish you win the contest with this Daniel. Daniel Turner July 16, 2016 at 6:39 AM Thank you Jean. You are such a dear. Lately I've been getting nothing but NA's. I appreciate your kindness.

Joanna Daniel July 11, 2016 at 9:21 AM Great humanitarian wishes, Daniel:) I too wrote of hearts not being broken:):) Daniel Turner July 11, 2016 at 9:27 AM Thank you Jo. I may not be a wealthy man but I have been blessed more than I deserve in life. All of my wishes are for mankind and the planet. I appreciate the friendly visit.