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I wish hearts were never broken Love would last forever Minds were always open All peoples, birds of a feather Tolerance a worldly endeavor I wish everyone had food to eat Ignorance was no more Pollution damage in retreat There was no rich or poor No such thing as war July 11 2016 English Quintain rhyme scheme ababb Daniel Turner

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/10/2016 7:06:00 PM

Yes I wish there was no such thing as war.I also wish there where no war. I wish that everyone had food to eat.I wish that there was no suffering in the world.Congratulations Daniel

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/11/2016 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Yes the world is a cruel place. I too wish for peace:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/16/2016 8:33:00 AM

Good thoughts, congratulations Daniel...

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. You are very thoughtful and kind.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/15/2016 11:05:00 PM

Congrats on your placement. This is a wonderful wish! :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Sunita.That's very thoughtful of you. I appreciate your kindness.

Jesse Day

Date: 7/15/2016 10:46:00 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place win in the Make a Wish contest - Enjoyed your wishes! - Jesse

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Jesse. I appreciate how thoughtful and kind you are. Peace my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2016 10:01:00 PM

Hi Daniel, Your wishes were heartfelt. I wish for the same things. Congrats on your winning write.It was well deserved:-).Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:43:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. I suppose we'll just have to keep our fingers crossed as well. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

John Lawless

Date: 7/15/2016 9:47:00 PM

Daniel I wish that even one of these would be realized in our time...congrats on your placement

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:42:00 AM

Thank you John. What a wonderful place this would be! I appreciate your kindness.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/15/2016 8:51:00 PM

So many wonderful wishes! Congrats on your 3rd place win, Daniel! Thank you for supporting my contest.

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Kim for letting me play along and for the consideration. I certainly am thankful for the placement.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/15/2016 10:55:00 AM

I wish your wish comes true Daniel...enjoyed...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:40:00 AM

Thanks Wing Man. Me too! I appreciate the friendly visit.

Jean Murray

Date: 7/13/2016 3:22:00 PM

I wish you win the contest with this Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/16/2016 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Jean. You are such a dear. Lately I've been getting nothing but NA's. I appreciate your kindness.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/11/2016 9:21:00 AM

Great humanitarian wishes, Daniel:) I too wrote of hearts not being broken:):)

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/11/2016 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Jo. I may not be a wealthy man but I have been blessed more than I deserve in life. All of my wishes are for mankind and the planet. I appreciate the friendly visit.