Make a Wish

MAKE A WISH


A wish for all the wishes that I wish
remove them from the murky field of doubt
make them come true with magic wands quick swish
awaken to the fairies sunrise shout
“SHAZAM!  Now that’s what I’m talking about!!”


7/7/2016

submitted to – Make a Wish – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:27 AM
John, love this! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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July 16, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Hi John, I don't know how I missed this write. But I liked it from start to finish. I was funny as well. A Big seven. Congrats on your win.It was well deserved: -)Alexis
Lawless Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Thanks Jesse, I had to have a little fun with it.
Day Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Congrats on your 7th place win in the Make a Wish contest - I like the humor! - Jesse
Merryman Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:17 PM
A fun write! John, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
Lawless Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thanks again Kim for tickling the muse.
Cheema Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:19 AM
That would be great!
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July 9, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Thanks Balveen
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