Make a Wish

Make a wish then blow out the candle
Something that you mind can't handle
Something that you wish to achieve
Keep the faith and just believe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
Christian Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:31 AM
congratulations on your featured poem wonderful, so swet
Hyler Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 11:05 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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December 26, 2013 at 12:23 AM
Hi Elvrnia, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
Sergi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Elvrnia a short poem with a powerful message. Let's always remember to "Keep the faith and just believe" nice write.
Gregory Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 10:40 AM
nostalgic fi real... your piece is nicely done keep it up
A   Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Elvrnia, love the passion from your pen.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 2:23 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Elvrina ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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