Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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I do not always stay on top of the mountain

The room is empty, tears produce no sound

The silence answered with deep thoughts

Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness

In my quietest and lonely moments

As the black chords in a sad play













  10.06.2016
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Paul Callus July 31, 2016 at 10:25 AM I'm touched by the sad vein that runs throughout this short but expressive poem, Anne Lise; your words and the visual compliment each other perfectly. ~ Congratulations on a merited podium finish:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2016 at 12:25 PM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight July 30, 2016 at 7:36 PM Powerfully sad and beautifully written, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your podium win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2016 at 7:32 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper July 30, 2016 at 5:06 PM Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, beautiful painting to go with your poem. Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2016 at 7:31 AM - Glad you liked it, Eve :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone July 30, 2016 at 3:03 PM The poem does not reflect your alias, Sunshine! ;-) When you say, "black chords," you mean somber and/or menacing chord combinations? Congrats on your placement! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2016 at 7:30 AM - Somber / Dark / Sad - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven July 11, 2016 at 1:47 AM Nice read, no wonder it made the most popular list that arrived in my e-mail. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2016 at 7:51 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone July 8, 2016 at 7:52 AM Sad. reflective, beautiful. Suggestion(s): Change "produces" to the singular, "produce." Possibly, add punctuation.... :-) Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2016 at 8:44 AM - Loneliness is sad, Tom - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Gelb July 6, 2016 at 8:18 PM Very nice Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2016 at 3:20 PM - Thank you for friendly visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith July 4, 2016 at 5:11 PM Some sad emotions displayed in this beautiful poem A-L. Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2016 at 3:19 PM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2016 at 12:00 PM Your line "Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness" is perfect to describe grief. Nothing but time helps. Beautiful poem Anne-Lise. I hope you are having a good weekend. Blessings, Connie Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 12:39 PM - Connie, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - My weekend was filled with sunshine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath June 12, 2016 at 11:53 AM A sad poem beautifully pictured my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 12:36 PM - Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft June 12, 2016 at 7:36 AM Good words put together well xxxx Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 9:06 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman June 12, 2016 at 7:27 AM Anne-Lise, your beautiful sunshine smile can't always dry the rain before it falls, and sometimes in life we hide our melancholy, like the unnoticed sad frown hidden behind the colors of a rainbow. A lovely emotional write. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 9:05 AM - James, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunita U.D Palawon June 12, 2016 at 5:50 AM Heavy and sad but it conveys lots of feelings Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 6:40 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2016 at 7:31 PM Enjoyed reading your expressive and emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2016 at 6:39 AM - Sara, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 1:09 PM A perfect picture of sadness and loneliness - a beautiful but sad write Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM - Loneliness is sad, dear Jan - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel June 11, 2016 at 7:40 AM A profound write, Anne-lise:) loved the picture too:) I can relate to this sad poem:) A fave:) Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:53 AM - Jo, thank you for friendly visits a fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2016 at 6:00 AM Before a tree grows deeper in the ground its roots drills in the same way a soul grows wiser in solitude and suffering! A very philosophical writing! Bravo dear, Anne-Lise. A seven! Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:53 AM - Thank you my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May June 11, 2016 at 5:23 AM In deep thought we move through highs and lows....Good write Anne...Have a great weekend.... Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:52 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith June 10, 2016 at 10:25 PM So blue Anne-Lise, point well defined... Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:51 AM - Thank you Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anand Parmale June 10, 2016 at 9:39 PM So dark and so deep....Beautiful write Anne.. 7 Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:51 AM - Anand, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2016 at 9:25 PM a sad one and I like it a lot, Anne lise Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:50 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France June 10, 2016 at 6:13 PM Anne, oh what a wonderful poem and a beautiful image, I am loving this 7 ~ Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:49 AM - Thank you B.W., for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray June 10, 2016 at 6:05 PM Still it is good to give expression to grief. Lovely verse Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2016 at 11:49 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day June 10, 2016 at 4:43 PM Loneliness and sadness coexist - very nice piece - Jesse Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2016 at 4:47 PM - Yes, more than we realize ... - Thanks for the friendly visit and great comments, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)