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He watched daily, and waited.
Time became a slow train,
inching by in uneven jerks.

The poetry journal lay nestled
among bills, circulars, catalogs.
He devoured it front to back.

His mind absorbed its gems
as eagerly as his teeth
mangled the peach.

The cat lay at his feet,
tail swishing side to side,
and watched a walking stick
snake up the windowpane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:29 PM
brilliant and perfect!
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 11:32 PM
You are overly generous, Ilene, but egotist that I am, I love it. Thank you.
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