Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Rictameter

Maidens

                                             
                                             Maidens

                                    like dreaming buds,

                             grow with passionate dreams.

                          ponder ever in gorgeous thoughts,
  
                   giggle with those unblemished rosy cheeks.
                
                          pure, tender and innocent hearts,
   
                                   equals to goddesses.
 
                                    On earth, they are
           
                                           daughters.




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Date: 11-02-2022

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Meghan Hutchings February 17, 2022 at 11:53 AM Congratulations! This is beautiful because people don't always think of maidens the way you described them. You have given them grace and beauty with your words. Great job! Much love...Meghan Patri Venkata Ramana February 18, 2022 at 10:40 PM Very happy to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot for reading my poem.

Unseeking Seeker February 10, 2022 at 10:25 PM A powerful entry! I must try out this form too Patri Venkata Ramana February 11, 2022 at 4:12 PM Thank you so much for reading my entry.