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Maiden Voyage

I had dwelt in the sky But not high enough I fear. Those dark mountains yonder That at first seemed motionless But that upon reflection moved Were but clouds of the sea kind Menacing if you ask me But oppressively so To a novice such as I On my maiden sea voyage, ha But the skipper seeing me thus All transfixed came over to me Hey, son, you missing dry land already? Whereupon I snapped out of my stupor No, Captain, I was just wondering How we’re going to navigate Past the dark hills yonder? The sea has no hills, son, And when the sea has hills I will be the first to know Now get back to your cabin And dream of your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/5/2015 11:19:00 PM
Gerald, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful I felt the sea and the cabin boy experience in every line of this write Great visual in your work here truely i loved it alot. cheri and thank you for your nice comments on my work also
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 12/25/2013 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Cheri and I trust you are having a wonderful holiday.
Date: 10/24/2013 1:07:00 PM
Hi Gerald, Nice nautical write..Thanks for the visit to my verse. Ken
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 11/6/2013 4:47:00 PM
Ken, Sara, Jake you make my day everytime you visit. Thanks.
Date: 10/24/2013 12:22:00 PM
Must have been some more waves..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2013 4:00:00 AM
It was nice to get a glimpse of your dreamscape, Gerald. This definitely deserves a Disney-Pixar shortfilm treatment!!!!
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:43:00 AM
anything to get out of reality...
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 10/18/2013 11:54:00 AM
PDA, Erich- Thank you. I was at the seaside recently-actually on a Ferry on a cloudy day. Hence the inspiration.
Date: 10/18/2013 11:42:00 AM
Hello Gerald, i re-read this poem, and i loved the voyage and dream inspired.. hope it was all a dream, Very good! ...Linda
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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 11/22/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda. I did more stupid things on my first voyage.
Date: 10/17/2013 6:02:00 PM
That's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice flow, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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