Maiden Voyage

I had dwelt in the sky 
But not high enough I fear. 
Those dark mountains yonder
That at first seemed motionless
But that upon reflection moved
Were but clouds of the sea kind 

Menacing if you ask me
But oppressively so 
To a novice such as I 
On my maiden sea voyage, ha
But the skipper seeing me thus 
All transfixed came over to me

Hey, son, you missing dry land already?
Whereupon I snapped out of my stupor
No, Captain, I was just wondering
How we’re going to navigate
Past the dark hills yonder?

The sea has no hills, son, 
And when the sea has hills
I will be the first to know
Now get back to your cabin 
And dream of your love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 5, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Gerald, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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December 23, 2013 at 11:26 AM
Wonderful I felt the sea and the cabin boy experience in every line of this write Great visual in your work here truely i loved it alot. cheri and thank you for your nice comments on my work also
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December 25, 2013 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Cheri and I trust you are having a wonderful holiday.
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October 24, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Hi Gerald, Nice nautical write..Thanks for the visit to my verse. Ken
Kithinji Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Ken, Sara, Jake you make my day everytime you visit. Thanks.
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October 24, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Must have been some more waves..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Ponce Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 4:00 AM
It was nice to get a glimpse of your dreamscape, Gerald. This definitely deserves a Disney-Pixar shortfilm treatment!!!!
A   Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:43 AM
anything to get out of reality...
Kithinji Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:54 AM
PDA, Erich- Thank you. I was at the seaside recently-actually on a Ferry on a cloudy day. Hence the inspiration.
A   Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Hello Gerald, i re-read this poem, and i loved the voyage and dream inspired.. hope it was all a dream, Very good! ...Linda
Kithinji Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Thanks Linda. I did more stupid things on my first voyage.
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October 17, 2013 at 6:02 PM
That's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice flow, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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