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Maiden Voyage

Flying among stars Gliding with ecstatic joy Guiding her fledgings Helping them with their new wings Assisting their maiden flight First mission with crowned success Heading back to nest with pride AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 4, 2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2019 3:41:00 AM

- Lovely, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/5/2019 3:41:00 AM

Ah, this one made me smile. It sounds like a joyful, proud moment for mama hawk, eagle, owl, and all of those others with fledgings. Nice one, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 8:34:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Most appreciated.