Line Gauthier Poet Personification

Maiden Voyage

Flying among stars
Gliding with ecstatic joy
Guiding her fledgings
Helping them with their new wings
Assisting their maiden flight
First mission with crowned success
Heading back to nest with pride 



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2019 at 3:41 AM - Lovely, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier March 5, 2019 at 8:34 AM Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger March 5, 2019 at 3:41 AM Ah, this one made me smile. It sounds like a joyful, proud moment for mama hawk, eagle, owl, and all of those others with fledgings. Nice one, Line! Line Gauthier March 5, 2019 at 8:34 AM Thanks, Caren. Most appreciated.