Nette Onclaud Poet Personification

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Maiden of Summer

She drifts in radiance
waking nightfall with palette's hues,
tresses of amber flames drip of vibrant
sensation… and so, in the glide
of  July nestling on grass and bouquets,
she waltzes through moon’s notes
with a luster of desire, bursting
into sheer madness on my glossed skin…

Oh how she flickers more dauntless
than a blend of passion and ease , flitting 
like a gypsy whose spirit enters inside my pores...
And Maiden of Summer thrusts her 
tanned arms fluid, raw, loving: then, to explode
into an awakened prance which enhances
love's sizzle through her open light
gently reeling with my bold adventures;

only to fade quickly in luscious splendour.


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Uploaded 10.16.2016

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Akkina Downing May 17, 2017 at 8:19 PM Wow wow, another breathtaking piece. You are just incredibly amazing :)

Agnes Krampe December 29, 2016 at 5:29 PM Congrats on your win, Nette. I love the imagery - you paint such a vivid picture. Agnes

Janice Canerdy December 23, 2016 at 3:58 PM How beautiful and appealing, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice

Doug Vinson December 23, 2016 at 1:57 PM "in the glide of" - Nette, your poems take us gliding through the air, shimmering in the beauty of your perceptions of the world.

Mark Martin December 23, 2016 at 9:11 AM Congrats on your second chance win! Great poem! :-)

Eve Roper December 22, 2016 at 8:59 PM This is beautiful, Nette, I love the vision you have created. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Rob Carmack December 22, 2016 at 8:35 PM I was trying to figure out my favorite part, but it seems my favorite part is the whole. Thank you and congrats.

Alexis Y. October 21, 2016 at 8:23 PM Hi Nette, This is so beautiful. You painted a lovely picture with words. Good personification. A big seven:-) Alexis

Supraja Kannan October 18, 2016 at 6:15 AM so beautifully written.... A big 7... Good luck with the contest...

Len Gasun October 18, 2016 at 2:32 AM This is a majestic beauty and so precious my dear friend, Nette! A high 7! What more can I say? Thank you so much. love lots and hug, Leonora

Paul Callus October 17, 2016 at 10:22 AM This is absolutely beautiful, Nette! Summer personified through the use of captivating poetic language! When you write like this you I can feel the passion and radiance of your golden pen! #7+++ Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2016 at 6:11 AM Good personification..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Very descriptive of early summer..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis October 17, 2016 at 5:32 AM Sparkling diamonds of expressions that dazzle the heart and mind dear, nette! Good luck and a seven!

Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2016 at 6:59 PM Nette,Nette, this poem glows with summer delight. You have outdone yourself with this magnificent masterpiece! A fave for me too! I loved it! 7 ; )

Agnes Krampe October 16, 2016 at 6:34 PM The first line drew me in - what a beautiful description, Nette. A fave.

Daniel Turner October 16, 2016 at 2:27 PM Possibly more beautiful than the actual change. Thrilling poetry, nette.

Paloma P October 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM The imagery here is splendiferous! Skillfully rendered. Good luck...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2016 at 12:25 PM - This is beautiful, my favorite for today - Best wishes for a beautiful new week, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker October 16, 2016 at 10:30 AM Rendering clouds become her dress as she clamors for the day's ball she is the light and the princess before she puts back on her shawl..couldn't help myself nette..your poetry reminded me of a poem I wrote years ago..yours has a beauty with jeweled light...good luck