Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

Maiden In a Maze

Adrift among tall reeds and grass

wild vines the winds have spread, adorned

perplexes, thus, a maiden's quest

A maze of tangles stirs the glass 

She's lost, when night comes vexed with thorns

to spark a tear, which stains her breast



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By Carrie Richards for Nette's Contest "Senses for a Sestet"
11/4/13

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Barbara Gorelick November 10, 2013 at 11:01 PM Just wonderful. congrats. BG

Sandra Adams November 10, 2013 at 6:10 PM beautifully penned Carrie...congrats on your awesome win :)

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2013 at 7:45 AM Awesome winning work..Congrats ..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo November 9, 2013 at 6:39 PM Hmm,Wonderful piece.Good visual....Congrats on your superb win...

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 6:05 PM Marvelous, very visual and brings out her perplexed feelings of being lost and sad. Congrats, Carrie.

Poet Tacito November 5, 2013 at 10:14 AM Incredible & fierce. Such is the lost who suddenly "find" their way when they have fallen. This speaks loudly to me. Fantastic job. Oh, check your Soup Mail... =)

Russell Sivey November 4, 2013 at 10:42 PM Wow, I love what you have seen within this image, you have painted a wonderful picture with your glorious words my friend! I could visualize exactly what was in the image by your awesome descriptions! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!