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Maiden In a Maze

Adrift among tall reeds and grass wild vines the winds have spread, adorned perplexes, thus, a maiden's quest A maze of tangles stirs the glass She's lost, when night comes vexed with thorns to spark a tear, which stains her breast
_________________________________________________ By Carrie Richards for Nette's Contest "Senses for a Sestet" 11/4/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2013 11:01:00 PM
Just wonderful. congrats. BG
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:10:00 PM
beautifully penned Carrie...congrats on your awesome win :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:45:00 AM
Awesome winning work..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:39:00 PM
Hmm,Wonderful piece.Good visual....Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:05:00 PM
Marvelous, very visual and brings out her perplexed feelings of being lost and sad. Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 11/5/2013 10:14:00 AM
Incredible & fierce. Such is the lost who suddenly "find" their way when they have fallen. This speaks loudly to me. Fantastic job. Oh, check your Soup Mail... =)
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Date: 11/4/2013 10:42:00 PM
Wow, I love what you have seen within this image, you have painted a wonderful picture with your glorious words my friend! I could visualize exactly what was in the image by your awesome descriptions! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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