Mai Tai Madness

Mai Tai Madness ~Oh, my friend, Gloria!~ Funny~till drinks made her totally unstable. We nearly got killed in her car! When on the Golden Gate Bridge, she screamed" I left my sweater back at the bar." Making a U-turn in the middle of the Golden Gate Bridge at rush hour, OMG,no less!  Cuss words and the "bird" were so shocking, I must confess. I made the sign of the cross, said my final prayers, with closed eyes. My stomach filled with a flurry  of butterflies. So grateful was I to get home in one piece, I literally cried and begged God to give Gloria, sober peace. June 22, 2019 3:30 pm PST
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Date: 6/23/2019 10:15:00 AM
Wow, a journey of terror, love this poem, so realistic, and love the point of it all,
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2019 10:25:00 AM
Terryfying as a plane about to crash! Thank you Harry for sharing with me, how it effected you. It's a guide for me, a lighthouse, if you will, to know more about how I can be a better poet. Thank you...PR
Date: 6/23/2019 8:57:00 AM
This happens in different forms..kudos, Panagiota for the scene you painted and the emotions that evoked with your piece..you also gave a voice to something many face and can't control.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2019 9:30:00 AM
Happy to know you liked how I painted the scene. Yes, it a problem in high denial worldwide. That does not mean people cannot recover.They do! It's a gift from God to be free of any substance or anything people abuse...food included! PR. There is an endless list of things humans are addicted to. PR
Date: 6/23/2019 8:53:00 AM
This is so much fun.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2019 8:56:00 AM
So glad, Richard it brought you pleasure!)) PR
Date: 6/23/2019 4:02:00 AM
"When on the Golden Gate Bridge, she screamed" I left my sweater back at the bar." - the U-turn at rush hour on the Golden Gate Bridge was totally unexpected, but you sure had my curiosity up on the quote above! Good one.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2019 8:19:00 AM
I think my hair stood up at that moment PR
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