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Magnificence

Peach colored clouds, were scrolled across the sky The mountain was fading into twilight I crossed the bridge where water was calm and I saw birds fly Underneath the half-moon already shining for the night The air was perfect, calm, cool and completely still As the sunset reflected colors, in every direction With magnificence guiding me back to the hill Scenic memories now in my mind, a reflection Heidi Sands 9/27/17

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Date: 9/28/2017 9:55:00 AM
heidi, greeat first line which caught my attention... and i felt your deep reflection till the end... wonderful!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Nette. I am so happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 9/28/2017 9:46:00 AM
Love the image, I want to be there. Well done, Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 10:07:00 AM
Hi Eve. Thank you. It is beautiful here, all seasons :)
Date: 9/28/2017 6:25:00 AM
A reflection and a healing...Good morning Heidi...Lovely poem
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 7:35:00 AM
Hi Arturo. I once did a painting of the photo you us now for your avatar. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 9/28/2017 4:39:00 AM
You write such beautiful scenic poetry my friend! I wish I could see personally what you describe so perfectly, it's almost like I was there! I surely enjoyed reading your incredible piece this morning! What a stunning description, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 7:34:00 AM
I wish you could see it too, Russell. I am happy when I can bring it to others :) Thank you
Date: 9/27/2017 7:17:00 PM
Magnificent poem as the scenery it depicts--a feeling of being under the moon, surrounded by nature's magic!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 7:39:00 PM
Yes, it sure was like nature's magic. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)
Date: 9/27/2017 6:26:00 PM
Just a lovely poem Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Gary, it was so beautiful to see :)
Date: 9/27/2017 6:26:00 PM
Yo depict the scene beautifully Heidi..Very nicely penned
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I love to bring the scenes to others :)
Date: 9/27/2017 6:15:00 PM
what lovely imagery Heidi, I especially love the peach coloured clouds:-) hugs jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Jan. It was absolutely beautiful here this evening :)

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