Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Magnificence

Peach colored clouds, were scrolled across the sky
The mountain was fading into twilight
I crossed the bridge where water was calm and I saw birds fly
Underneath the half-moon already shining for the night

The air was perfect, calm, cool and completely still
As the sunset reflected colors, in every direction
With magnificence guiding me back to the hill
Scenic memories now in my mind, a reflection

Heidi Sands

9/27/17

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Nette Onclaud September 28, 2017 at 9:55 AM heidi, greeat first line which caught my attention... and i felt your deep reflection till the end... wonderful!..huggs Heidi Sands September 28, 2017 at 10:07 AM Thank you Nette. I am so happy you enjoyed it :)

Eve Roper September 28, 2017 at 9:46 AM Love the image, I want to be there. Well done, Heidi Heidi Sands September 28, 2017 at 10:07 AM Hi Eve. Thank you. It is beautiful here, all seasons :)

Arturo Michael September 28, 2017 at 6:25 AM A reflection and a healing...Good morning Heidi...Lovely poem Heidi Sands September 28, 2017 at 7:35 AM Hi Arturo. I once did a painting of the photo you us now for your avatar. Thank you for your comment :)

Russell Sivey September 28, 2017 at 4:39 AM You write such beautiful scenic poetry my friend! I wish I could see personally what you describe so perfectly, it's almost like I was there! I surely enjoyed reading your incredible piece this morning! What a stunning description, Great Work!! Heidi Sands September 28, 2017 at 7:34 AM I wish you could see it too, Russell. I am happy when I can bring it to others :) Thank you

Vijay Pandit September 27, 2017 at 7:17 PM Magnificent poem as the scenery it depicts--a feeling of being under the moon, surrounded by nature's magic! Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 7:39 PM Yes, it sure was like nature's magic. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)

Gary Smith September 27, 2017 at 6:26 PM Just a lovely poem Heidi :) Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you Gary, it was so beautiful to see :)

Joseph May September 27, 2017 at 6:26 PM Yo depict the scene beautifully Heidi..Very nicely penned Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you Joseph. I love to bring the scenes to others :)

Jan Allison September 27, 2017 at 6:15 PM what lovely imagery Heidi, I especially love the peach coloured clouds:-) hugs jan xx Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 6:21 PM Thank you Jan. It was absolutely beautiful here this evening :)