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Try and guess the mineral/ crystal!

Close up, Beautiful golds and yellows erupt, As I look through the microscope, Be careful on the stope, Don't trip, or the fools will mistake, And betake, It's beautiful crystal formations, All in one station, Packed together as one, Glittery, golden, crystal sun, Tricking all and pretending to be another, I bet it wants to be more important, if it had its druthers, Lines everywhere, A mix of colors making me stare, Eyes have to dart around to find the different shades of gold, Small or big specks of yellow, so bold, It fools everyone, making them question, Whoever holds possession, Look closely at its setup, Close up.

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Date: 2/25/2024 5:50:00 PM
A favourite gemstone of mine.
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Fire Bird
Date: 3/5/2024 9:27:00 PM
Woah that's really cool! - Phoenix :D
Date: 2/15/2024 8:05:00 PM
Really Enjoyed, though I am late to visit. Blessings.
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Fire Bird
Date: 2/15/2024 8:08:00 PM
All good Anisha, thanks for commenting! - Phoenix :)
Date: 12/3/2023 8:17:00 AM
Aloha, Phoenix. Lots of those here on our volcanic island of Hawaii--like your infrences, it is that kind of a gold, my friend. Mahalo, William
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Fire Bird
Date: 12/3/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thanks! Yes, its Pyrite! - Phoenix
Date: 11/27/2023 12:55:00 PM
Love the poem Fire….but no idea what it is hehe!! Debx
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Fire Bird
Date: 11/29/2023 4:46:00 PM
Just a twist of words!
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Deb M
Date: 11/27/2023 7:37:00 PM
Phoenix not Fire!! Ha
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Fire Bird
Date: 11/27/2023 3:27:00 PM
Thats ok Deb! Thanks for commenting! - Phoenix :)))
Date: 11/27/2023 2:04:00 AM
pyrite? A fun read:)
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Fire Bird
Date: 11/27/2023 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, it is Pyrite! - Phoenix :)

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