Premiere Contest WinnerMagnetism

for you are this longing 
gravitational force-
you steal my senses and
secure me to the deepest
parts of your existence. 

                you and me have this 
                attraction, 
                causing a chain reaction-
                without reason or rhyme, 
                we've traveled through
                space and time. 

for we are intense magnetism-
affinity and allurement, 
drawing us closer and closer...
towards temptation. 
                  
                  you and me have this
                  fascination, 
                  a God-given creation-
                  keep pulling me near, 
                  live inside my gravity....      
                                          ...without fear.


June 21, 2017
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Stars Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:50 AM
yeah ... we see ... we have seen ... you ... are available to conquer the worded emotion battle . ... yeah ... wow ...
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July 9, 2017 at 3:06 PM
OKAY OKAY OKAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY Laura you killed it i honestly dont think i want find anything better than this anywhere i hope not to thank you for that piece of work if you dont mind please post it on my fb page through the link https://www.facebook.com/PoetryClan/ ill appreciate
Dutta Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Big Congrats Laura to win top. Hugs. Anisha
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Hi, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved winning placement. This is fine work. Blessings. Curtis.
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July 8, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Wow! Congrats on your well-deserved win, Luloo! Janice
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