Magnetic Bliss Pulse

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Sketch credit: Artist SR Mehta, downloaded from internet

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Magnetic bliss pulse, joyful pull Radiates inside out Partaking of soma, we’re full Bliss beats let out a shout We would if we could, share But no one’s there to pair Only a handful dare Ignition at once Magnetic bliss pulse 14-August-2022 Quietus

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/14/2022 10:49:00 PM

A great quietus. My you find bliss.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/15/2022 10:23:00 PM

Hope you are doing well, Victor

Constance La France

Date: 8/14/2022 3:05:00 PM

Seeker, love your quietus form and the poem and that image is wonderful too, blessings ~Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/14/2022 7:02:00 PM

Thank you, Constance :)

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/14/2022 8:56:00 AM

Wonderful poem! BTW I wrote my last poem "My Name" for your Non-Duality contest, but I was too late to submit it! I wrote it this morning and didn't bother to check the due date for the contest. Anyway here it is: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_name_1480016

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/14/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thanks for sharing ~ beautiful poem. have a look at the next contest, ‘Inner conflict’

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/14/2022 4:29:00 AM

Such a graceful write in your own invented Quietus form Seeker... Thanks for sharing... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/14/2022 4:55:00 AM

Thanks Anitha! So happy you enjoyed :)