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Magnetic Attraction of Love

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In the serene solitude of your slumbers, You’ll dream of me forever and ever. For there, with my enigmatical looks, I’ve been haunting you From the first day you’ve seen me. You have so often wondered at that look that draws you to look so intently in my eyes. I see you watching in the shade Of that lovely gazebo in the garden. You try to focus on my soulful eyes, I notice your intense use Of your make-ups of your black dark eyelashes, Yet it is that exquisite pearl necklace that I love. It draws all your wanton attention. You look at a large diamond ring Flashing it in the filtering sunbeams. Oh stop looking at these gaudy trifles Nor must you concern yourself about me. Just look into my mesmerizing eyes. Concentrate on my face all lit up, Admire the light on my sweet kissing lips, And don’t dare compare them To that aloof Mona Lisa’s smile. One day, when I’ll come to you In the serene solitude of your slumbers, And I’ll show you how a kiss should be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/19/2023 11:05:00 PM
I am new here, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Date: 5/15/2021 11:30:00 PM
I love this, to capture your eyes and see the want in them. Good write my friend.
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Date: 5/14/2021 11:32:00 PM
Wow! Such a lovely read, Victor, you are a romantic at heart:)
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Date: 5/14/2021 4:23:00 PM
Wow Victor, how a kiss should be, what a dream that’d be… Belle
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Date: 5/14/2021 3:12:00 PM
Love is a magnet that draws you in, there is no escaping its clutches. You excel at romantic verse Victor. Been away for a week, just playing catch up, hope you are well. Tom
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Date: 5/14/2021 11:15:00 AM
With a title like that who couldn't be drawn to the poem :) well done Victor
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Date: 5/14/2021 8:15:00 AM
Very romantic, Victor, and intriguing as well. You make me wish I knew more about the characters in your beautiful poem! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2021 7:37:00 AM
Now ... who is the hesitant one, I wonder?
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Date: 5/14/2021 6:30:00 AM
So wonderfully romantic, Victor. And as always, you painted the scene beautifully.
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Date: 5/14/2021 4:53:00 AM
A haunting and mysterious write indeed! Enjoyed!
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Date: 5/14/2021 4:42:00 AM
Pleasantly written, heartfelt, Victor - Beautifully composed with deep feelings she should be happy with, have a great weekend, my friend.
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Date: 5/14/2021 3:49:00 AM
Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 5/14/2021 1:14:00 AM
- A kiss she will never forget ... romantic, Victor - Beautifully written :) - Have a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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