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Magicicada 13 On Tbi Associated Rage: Stormy Inside

the calm and the storm all in one cut down the middle MagiCicada13

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/16/2019 4:06:00 PM

This reminds me of the one time in my life I felt icy rage; I felt I could coldly destroy it all (luckily it has not happened again, yet)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/20/2019 6:37:00 AM

It's a helluva you name it chemical release huh?! <3

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2019 12:10:00 PM

reminds me of Jeckyl and hyde. Having read your comment about cicadas I've just read about swarms of locusts in Sardinia causing such devastation:-( hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/13/2019 12:43:00 PM

There is that ;) though hubby get's that one, Hulk is mine lol~ Yeah, I hate cicadas getting that rap, they're mating not buffet'ing... xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2019 6:41:00 PM

Maureen, it makes sense to me. Two sides to every coin kind of thing, for me anyway. It makes me think of a lightening strike too with the final line! Thanks for your sample here!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 7:16:00 PM

Andrea, you read me well, especially the last line, I was hoping for that violence to seep through, thank YOU :) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/11/2019 11:35:00 PM

Howdy Maureen. Maybe I'm dumber then I thought, but I don't understand the title; nor understand this poem. Any chance of you explaining this to me? I know I shouldn't ask, but to me it seems like an abstract painting painted in all yellows titled "hateful red", if you know what I mean. What better then to ask the poet herself, because why make a comment either positive or negative if I truly don't know what it means. Is it something Canadian? (as if you speak a different language) jajaja...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/13/2019 9:56:00 AM

...and why I can afford to love them ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/13/2019 9:51:00 AM

They're the cicadas mistakenly called locusts, due to their swarming nature. Their prime numbered gestation periods reduces occurrence of two species emerging the same year. It's the overwhelm the prey method. Up here we get Dogday Cicadas, not a periodical species, they don't swarm.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/12/2019 7:56:00 PM

Wow I did not know the yearly names of cicadas. Learn something everyday; well actually many things. Very cool Maureen. Thanks.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 8:49:00 AM

I have a title. :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 8:27:00 AM

...my ex called it "smashy smashy"

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 7:07:00 AM

This, one of the rare occasions I can't think of an appropriate title; were it not for my contest, I'd probably call it "poem".

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 5:45:00 AM

Lol! The title, indicating an exemplar for my latest contest. Magicicada is the genus of 13 & 17 year cicada, Magi, three wise- Cicada, as loud as you can, my idea for a westernized ku form. As for the poem, I sorta suffer from Incredible Hulk disease. Does that make sense? xomo

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/11/2019 9:44:00 PM

Wow, such a potent pen, girl! Your creativity shines, as does your uncanny ability to turn a phrase. Warmest wishes always, my lovely.. ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/12/2019 5:47:00 AM

Thank you Susan <3 xomo!