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Magical Things

I think I’ll live forever I think I’ll refuse to die Plant my body in the ground My spirit’s going to fly Please come fly away with me Once this journey is complete Universe can be our home Our own magical retreat Two celestial bodies Darling lets take to the sky Forget the why, when or how This dream is for you and I Gliding upon golden wings We can dance from star to star I would travel anyplace So I could be where you are Angel’s dance like fireflies Through trails of glittering dust In heaven magical things Exist for people like us It seems we have come so far Seems the limit is the sky When I think of who you are Tears of joy I need to cry Everything is what you are You are everything to me Long as eternity last My soul shall be one with thee So let’s live on forever We will each refuse to die Plant our bodies in the ground As our spirits take to the sky

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/12/2010 11:28:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round - a well deserved win. Wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/3/2010 12:57:00 PM

same old mike i used to know. a great poet. masterfully done. John Henry Loving III

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2010 6:36:00 AM

Very interesting last two lines.YOu want to soar with imagination it sounds like! What a romantic you are, sweet MIchael! thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea

Anna-Marie Ribbe

Date: 6/2/2010 1:23:00 AM

wow that brought tears to my eyes so very Beautifully done loved it

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2010 7:14:00 AM

magical indeed excellent poem, harry

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/1/2010 5:12:00 AM

Awesome write, Michael! Enjoyed reading it today. And thank you for your congrats on my featured poem...Have a great week! Gert

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/1/2010 12:59:00 AM

Michael - thanks for this magical journey ;) Ps: and for the encouragement!! God Bless Wilma

Rauwolfia Ra

Date: 5/31/2010 9:47:00 PM

Nice, well written.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/31/2010 6:58:00 PM

great magical thoughts--hang in there!! Are you feeling better? Thanks for your comments on my works!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/31/2010 5:03:00 PM

I really enjoyed this magical journey of yours :) & I particularly liked how your first and last stanzas are different versions of each other but somehow connecting the entire poem together, very nice! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2010 4:55:00 PM

This one touched my soul and spirit..Enjoyed..Keep the creative and faith pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2010 4:02:00 PM

Nice spirit Mr.Jordan, love the life you present right now. The more interesting part is the life you have after you are put in to the gound, enjoyed your poem. Hope you are enjoying your Memorial day,..p..d

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/30/2010 6:11:00 PM

The Universe as a home - Death will not exist. Fantastic thought.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2010 4:35:00 PM

What a beauty this is, Michael. It is so nice to have you back, and sharing your gift! So lovely, and inspirational is this poem! ~ Love, Carrie

Heidie Buys

Date: 5/30/2010 12:16:00 PM

Such a beautiful and whimsical poem. Well done my friend. Love Heidie

Date: 5/30/2010 10:40:00 AM

You have me smiling with this uplifting view. Hope my spirit will take to the sky and sing with the angels too. I've no doubt that you'll be doing that some day. Your faith will carry you wherever you are. Blessings to you for sharing thi spoem with us. Karen

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/30/2010 9:46:00 AM

And why is this not in a book mike simply stunning write for you and family to remind yourselfs you are human and have the knack to lay it on the line hope you print this out and put it on an anniversity card for her keep up the wonderful work here and in life mike for you will always be a winner in my book

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2010 8:43:00 AM

I'm sure you wrote this uplifting poem for your wonderful wife, MJ, who has been such a great source of inspiration for you. Indeed, faith in eternal life allows us to realize we never truly die. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/30/2010 8:37:00 AM

Excellent outlook on life Michael and your first stanza states the fact of it all.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today ..hope u are having a safe and happy holiday weekend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"