Magical Spell

Our first date ~~ double
A lasting kiss ~~ phone number
Marriage ~~ resolute
Date Written:3/11/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:18 AM
That last line shows what a success the other two lines were.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun/true write. Three lines that tell the story. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Baker Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Now that's what I call a great first date! Congratulations on finding someone to be (in Love) with. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. That first date was Sweet/Magical. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Thompson Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Sweet write Paula. I love when you say Marriage~ Resolute. Have a good one!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Thanks for your note. Love is Sweet and Magical. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day............
Ashley Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Love’s magical spell never to be broken.. your romantic haiku is enchanting, Paula. Warmest wishes to you, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Thanks for your note. Yes, Love is Magical with a Magical Spell. Glad you like this Magical one. Have a blessed day............
Calasibetta Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Another charming write ~ that "Magical Spell" that spans a life time all in a simple Haiku~Perfection! :)Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for your note. Yes, that Magical Spell that takes over. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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