Magical Spell

Our first date ~~ double A lasting kiss ~~ phone number Marriage ~~ resolute Date Written:3/11/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2022 9:18:00 AM

That last line shows what a success the other two lines were.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 12:38:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun/true write. Three lines that tell the story. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Bill Baker

Date: 3/17/2022 2:23:00 PM

Now that's what I call a great first date! Congratulations on finding someone to be (in Love) with. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 12:37:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. That first date was Sweet/Magical. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Jt Nyx

Date: 3/14/2022 9:12:00 AM

Sweet write Paula. I love when you say Marriage~ Resolute. Have a good one!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2022 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Love is Sweet and Magical. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day............

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/12/2022 8:46:00 AM

Love’s magical spell never to be broken.. your romantic haiku is enchanting, Paula. Warmest wishes to you, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2022 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Yes, Love is Magical with a Magical Spell. Glad you like this Magical one. Have a blessed day............

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/11/2022 8:57:00 AM

Another charming write ~ that "Magical Spell" that spans a life time all in a simple Haiku~Perfection! :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2022 12:44:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Yes, that Magical Spell that takes over. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/weekend..........