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Magical Snow

Magical snow on a scintillating Christmas night 
                        spreading endless love and gracious blessings,
                          evergreens decked and shining bright,
                      wondrous snowflakes twinkling shimmering ~ 

                         spreading endless love and gracious blessings
                             harmony and peace nature brings  
                      wondrous snowflakes twinkling shimmering
                               world turns into a joyful dream~
  
                            harmony and peace nature brings
                           Christmas spirit upholds compassion
                              world turns into a joyful dream
                           care true essence and sheer devotion ~

                           Christmas spirit upholds compassion 
                          evergreens decked and shining bright,   
                           care true essence and sheer devotion
                      magical snow on a scintillating Christmas night ~


                                      November 27, 2021
                        "Old or New Pantoum" Poetry contest
                                      Sponsor: Joseph May
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Hankins Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Lovely lines, Malabika. I so love a good Pantoum, and you have penned one so perfect for this season of the year. Good stuff!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Thanks, Milton. Really appreciate your comment.
May Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 10:53 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful Pantoum Malabika..
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Thanks, Joseph. appreciate your kind comment.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Season’s greetings! You have switched on my Christmas mood! A bit of snow where I live.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Season's greetings to you, Krish. In my place it's snowing all day today.
Wolf Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 7:20 PM
Your magical write is pure enchantment, Mala. Season's best, Gershon
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Dear Gershon, so happy to hear that. I never wrote Pantoum before - thank you.
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