- Magical Mood -

Moonlight .... watching over the dark
    Let your thoughts wander in silence murmur
    Capture in your hands a little moonlight veil

    Quiet moments that break down
    Raspy cry of a swan couple
    Ears and eyes watching in the night magical mood

    The sparkling silence is gone - eternal contrasts
    Background sound from the stream that roars
    The air is filled with pure truth - the night turns into a new day






    18.05.2014
    A-L Andresen :)
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May Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Congrats on your win Anne...hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:16 AM
- Thanks, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your Magical Mood, win, Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:58 AM
- Thanks, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Magical Mood indeed
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:38 AM
- A Magical win :))))))))) - Thanks, Rajat :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 3:21 AM
Wow lovely and captivating write Anne Lise! Congrats on fine win!
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:35 AM
- A surprising win :) - Thanks Dr. Upma :) - Anne-Lise :)
Oule Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:41 PM
My Fav Line "Moonlight .... watching over the dark Let your thoughts wander in silence murmur Capture in your hands a little moonlight veil" Well done congs i loved this one
Oule Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:26 AM
So welcome
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:34 AM
- A surprising win :) - Thanks Bryan :) - Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Anne, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:33 AM
- A surprising win :) - Thanks Skat :) - Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, your description is pure magic and I am enthralled by the imagery. This is such a beautiful write. I enjoyed reading this lovely piece. Warmest regards.
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 12:09 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Succinct - right to the point in a few words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:26 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Matthew :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:52 PM
A magical mood that breeds serenity and calm!!! A truly fine write my friend. One I enjoyed reading very much!!!!
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:58 AM
- A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Robert - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bordner Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Ooooo..."The air is filled with pure truth..." there is always something so spirited and regenerative in your work/soul Anne, I truly appreciate it. I like raspy cries, that's hot! Fantastic write my friend. J.A.B.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:24 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Justin :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bird Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:48 AM
I connect with the moonlight :) Favorite line: "The sparkling silence is gone"
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:13 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my "new" friend Sandy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:42 AM
Beautiful. You paint such a serene scene here. Lovely.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:12 AM
- A moment of nature mystery - A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Scott :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 3:29 PM
really very beautifully painted piece
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 3:32 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my friend Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Peace and silence walk hand in hand along the enchanting path that leads towards the beginning of a new day....lovely, Anne Lise !! :) // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 5:45 AM
- A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Nice creative work on this poem. Has a magical glow to it. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:26 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my dear friend Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Very descriptive and creative work..Expressed from midnight to morn..A very quiet and special time of life..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 8:01 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:14 PM
A picture of moonlight splendor my friend! One that pleases the eye and ever so soothes the mind! Bravo!!!!!!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 3:45 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thompson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:02 PM
I took it in, and listened with my heart.. I enjoyed your warm and wise spirit. Please keep writing and sharing. Thank you for sharing your work :)
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:12 PM
- A moment of nature mystery - A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, new friend Jessica :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 20, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Your heart and soul is filled with wisdom. Loved the ways of depicting a nice truth. Always, my lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:51 PM
- I listen .... watching .... and we learn throughout life ... - A moment of nature mystery - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, friend bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:36 PM
bring on more magic, anne... sweet day to to you with huggs!
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:42 PM
- Magic and warm huggs to you, Nette :))
Dorr Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 11:37 AM
So well put, but hoping for more. Best wishes, Peter.
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 11:44 AM
- My Norwegian teacher always said : - "Poems should be written short and direct ! -" Long poems .... catching bad attention "- :))) - - Thanks for the nice visit - and comments, Peter - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 6:05 AM
You perfectly captured the moments when nature wakes and begins stirring to ready for a new day. Lovely
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 8:04 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my dear friend Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kim Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Hi Anne, Thank you very much for the warm and kind welcome! If only we let more magical moods take us rather than let them stay in our dreams! Beautiful! ~Becc
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:23 AM
- A moment of nature mystery - A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, Becc :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Simply a very lovely write Anne..Thanks for your visits to my page!
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:22 AM
- A moment of nature mystery - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments, friend Ken - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Your poem depicts the peaceful night turning into dawn as a lovely flower slowly blossoming. Just beautiful. One of your best Anne Lise!
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 1:56 PM
- A magical image from silence to the sound of a new day. - Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,Connie - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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